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Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views. Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views.

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Now a days
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media
 is so active that they are publishing the private
information
 of the famous without even taken the consent of them. Some
people
 think
this
 should be allowed and
other
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others
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 think
this
 practice should
be stop
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be stopped
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 as everyone have
right
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the right
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 to keep
there
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their
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 private life in privacy. In my view
this
 is wrong and
this
 must
be control
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be controlled
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 or even stopped. As the world is more advance and
people
 are
upto
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up to
 date with
the
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apply
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technology and
media
.
However
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 when it
come
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comes
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 to
media
,
media
 is the one of the most important
sorce
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source
 of
information
 from which we can get of the
information
 about anything like sport, politics, weather forecast, about famous
people
 or celebrities, etc.
Media
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The media
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 is doing
lot
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a lot
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 of good work and showing the general public the true face of democracy, etc.
However
, for TRP,
Media
 is doing whatever they can do like they are publishing the private
information
 of famous
people
 and celebrities, etc. without even taking
the
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apply
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consent from them.
This
give
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gives
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 popularity to the
media
 channel but at the same time,
this
 will put
the
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a
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 negative impact on that person.
For example
: In my
country
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,country
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 India,
media
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the media
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 do publish the personal info of the celebrities to get the
trp
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top
 for there channel. In my
view
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,view
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this
 is wrong to expose or to
telecaste
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telecast
 the privacy of any person because everyone
have
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has
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right
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the right
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 to have their known privacy and
media
dont
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don't
 have any right to telecast it without any consent from them. Therefor some control or restriction should be put on the
media
 or some legal action should be taken on
media
 for doing all
this
.
However
, In conclusion,
Media
 should think before telecasting
any thing
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anything
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 which is personal and
government
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the government
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 should take some legal action if anything unnecessary is been publish by
media
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the media
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.
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