a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views

communication has become a serious problem in the modern era.In some ,situations younger

people

feel it is hard to deal with older ones in some places.

this

essay will discuss the problems and respective measures for

this

kind of

people

. There are primarily two reasons why they feel like that.

firstly

,nowadays most

of

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young

people

are introverts.

although

parents

take care of their education,

but

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they don'

t

care about their emotions because of their busy schedule.

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assume a child who is living in a school hostel for study purpose,neither their

parents

won'

t

meet him daily nor talk to him.in

this

way they become alone and don'

t

talk to anyone.

secondly

,in the era of

digitalization

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everyone is interested in digital features

such

as video call,audio call,messaging and much more.they don'

t

know how to deal with real-

life

problems if they continue

this

throughout their

life

.a recent study in a school shows that a major part of children isn'

t

aware of finding solutions to real scenarios.overall,

i

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can say that

parents

and digitalization are causing many problems to younger

people

with minor defects. there are so many solutions for

this

type of situation,but

i

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will mention two of them here.

parents

need to spend more time with their children,like talking to them about what is right or what is wrong.how to deal with hard situations in

life

.by providing

this

kind of information to them boots their

life

.young

people

themselves need to restrict their usage of time on electronic goods and start talking to older

people

.because they are the ones who know how to deal with hard situations.to sum up,by following those solutions maybe they can talk to older

people

in any kind of place. to conclude,younger

people

need to come out in the world of online games and messaging.

although

they give you temporary happiness,

but

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they are not useful in real

life

.because face to face interaction is most difficult when compared with online.