The development of tourism contribute to english becoming the most prominent language in the world .some people think this will lead to english becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are the advantages and disadvantages having one language in the world .

In
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era of globalization,
tourism
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to
english
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becoming the most prominent
language
in the world . The
tourism
is
backbone
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of every country .Due to
overcrowd
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of
english
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tourism
many
people
argue that it will lead to
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spoken globally . I
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will discuss both advantages and
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disadvantages in
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. The
first
and foremost reason to support my ideology is that
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day
by
day
tourism
industry becoming popular .
Firstly
, it is easy when it comes to
language
when
tourist
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a tourist
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came and they travel and communicate with each
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so it will easy if there is
one
language
.
Secondly
, local
people
understand
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thair
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needs and requirements . Many
people
hire a guide when they travelled so for that they have to pay for that but if
one
language
is
tthere
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there
so it will beneficial for them.0
Moreover
, it will win-win situation for both
tourism
as well as local
people
. On the
one
hand ,
tourist
are
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backbone
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of every country so local
bussiness
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business
increase
also
.Many times
tourist
only
speakenglish
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speak English
so local
people
do not understand .
Tourism
also
affect
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the culture and tradition of the local
people
.
On the other hand
, there are many disadvantages of
one
language
.The diversity of culture will
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and root becoming weak
day
by
day
.
Furthermore
, many
people
think that rush of
english
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tourist
they think they should learn
english
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.In
this
situation
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pros are more than cons. To conclude, having
one
language
has its own benefits .but due to boosting the
tourism
english
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speaker should learn
this
language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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