Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Undeniably,
music
plays a crucial role in our lives and eliminates distinctions and differences among various
cultures
and generations. It symbolises harmony and reflects humanity. I quite agree that
music
helps bring
people
from various
cultures
and generations together. One of the reasons
music
excretes the hurdles among different nations and
cultures
is that
people
enjoy
music
from every part of the world, and it speaks the same language, which embodies human emotion, joy, love and sorrow.
Music
does not need interpretation to be enjoyed and understood as it touches our heart and resonates in our mind. No matter what language we speak or understand, we appreciate the melody and depth of
music
which is why
people
of all ages can sit together and enjoy the same
music
.
Moreover
, nations influence each other with the type of
music
they produce and the type of musical instruments they use.
This
amalgamation reduces cultural differences and brings
people
from different
cultures
and ages to a common platform.
For example
, many
music
genres, that we enjoy these days, were derived from multiple nations and
cultures
and
people
from all these
cultures
enjoy and love them.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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