With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

It is considered that
institutes
must implement
sports
in all courses to overcome the rising number of obese people. I strongly agree with
this
statement, as
this
could help a lot in many ways for
young
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generation, who is suffering from health issues. I have explained
further
in detail
about
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the positive aspects related to
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statement. A healthy and active mind results in better academic performance. Regular
sports
activities
help us to achieve
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energy which makes
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mind healthy and active. Nowadays,
students
are so much into their studies that they hardly get
time
to make themselves registered for game or
such
activities
.
However
, if
institutes
take the reasonability and make
sports
an essential element in their degree course,
then
all
students
can avail
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opportunity of performing
in game
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activities
of their own choices.
For example
,
a
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research has shown that
institutes
with results focus not only on education but
also
on the extra curriculum
activities
. Those
students
have a healthy lifestyle and they excel more in life by continuing their habit of
sports
even after education. Most
time
of
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is spent
on
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where they do nothing but study and eat.
Therefore
, they get lazy and dumb, which results in putting on extra kilos on their body. Many
students
,
for instance
, in
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can be seen getting obese and inactive due to the lack of interest and involvement in
sports
activities
. Universities
students
gets
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loads of assignments and projects which make them so much busy in their work, which means the only
time
when they get
time
to perform
sports
is when they are
in
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campus. So it is necessary for
institutes
work
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on stadiums and playgrounds to promote healthy
sports
. To recapitulate
,
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stated that universities must adopt
sports
in order to put a period on the ultimately growing rate of extra weighted people. I firmly believe that it is a great solution
towards
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this
problem. It will not only benefit
students
but
also
universities as
there
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students
will get
good
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result with
active
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mind and healthy body.
Moreover
,
students
not getting enough
time
out of
busy
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routine can get the opportunity to practice game
activities
at their campus.
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