Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to help assist me to change my current allotted

room

as I can no longer tolerate sharing my

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with the one whom I am with. I am aware of the fact that there will be a problem while sharing the

room

as each individual is different. I am a very calm person and habituated to adapt to the surroundings. I have classes early morning due to which I need to go to bed early. That being said my roommate is addicted to being on calls all night and does play loud music. As the matter of fact, I tried to confront her about my distress that I go through due to her actions. Sadly, there is no change in her

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. It's my sincere hope that you understand my situation and help me accommodating a private

room

where I can live peacefully without any interference. I am willing to pay the additional charges for a single

room

. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Brittny Myers.

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