In many countries,People are wearing western-style clothes rather than the traditional type of clothes. Why is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In
this
day and age, a ubiquitous trend could be found in our society that individuals prefer to wear
clothes
different from their domestic styles.
This
essay will explore the root cause behind
such
a tendency and reveal a personal attitude towards it. There are two reasons for
this
.
First
of all, western popular
culture
will influence more
people
to wear Western
clothes
. The
people
in contact with western movies, TV dramas, music, and other content, will think that Western modelling is cool, that it is representative of the latest
culture
and the strongest productivity, so they will consider imitating everything in these media, and clothing is one of them.
In addition
, Western clothing is easier to make than traditional clothing. Compared with the complicated traditional clothing in many countries, Western clothing is nothing more than some short sleeves, jeans, and Western clothing has been in mass production for a long time. In terms of cost and production difficulty, Western clothing has advantages,
people
will wear Western clothing.
For example
, the Miao
people
in China now don't wear traditional gold and silver
clothes
but wear simple short sleeves
instead
.
this
phenomenon will lead to the loss of local clothing
culture
. After all, clothing is the living history of a region or tribe. We can see the development level and the object of worship of a region or tribe from the degree of clothing accessories and magnificence. If these things are replaced by Western clothing,
then
the corresponding
culture
will gradually lose, and the local
people
's sense of identity will
also
decrease.
In addition
,
this
trend will
also
lead to the decline of the traditional clothing industry, clothing crafts to find another way out, the number of
people
reduced, resulting in irreversible impact. In conclusion, I hold the point of view that it is inappropriate for one to completely set aside their traditional
clothes
and become a follower of a western trend, or vice versa. We can still follow western trends but should not shy away from our traditional
clothes
.
This
way we will be following new trends, yet promoting our
culture
and be very much attached to our roots.
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