Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It can be said, that the recidivism of convicted people is a growing tendency worldwide. The reasons
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issue derive from society itself. There is one common element among delinquents that all of them had a troubled childhood. Physically and mentally abusive parents often combined with drug addiction or alcoholism, unloving environment, and unrealistic expectations towards their children are often the main reasons why one turns out to be a lawbreaker or in a better case “just” a mentally ill person, who carries its wounds through the whole
life
. These factors can be considered
also
as the motivations of backsliding but there are several other elements of
this
phenomena. After an inmate of
prison
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sentence and is released, one cannot rely on anyone. It possesses neither supporting family members nor friends and often the freshly released offender is stigmatized by the community. As a consequence, these human beings become unassimilable members of the nation who are not able to live an ordinary, hard-working
life
.
Thus
, with
this
in mind, prevention is needed definitely. In order to avoid relapse, humanity must understand the mentality and values of a convict. According to several articles and books, these people have really interesting inner-directed principles. They look at
life
from a different point of view, from where it is thoroughly normal to liquidate an innocent individual. Even though
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they might have
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approach, but culprits and ordinary representatives of
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have more in common than it can be thought. After understanding
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paradox, amelioration should begin. The
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and most important place where it should begin is the prisons worldwide. The
prison
system is expected not only to shelter offenders but
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transforming them into subservient citizens. According to a report which took place in Nigeria, the three major elements of
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system that can successfully reduce recidivism are
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treatment for the abused ones which can help to remove barriers that prevent from employment and integration, education provides the skills necessary for inmates to obtain the type of jobs that lead to more successful outcomes and opportunity to do some work in
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in order to have proper spared money and support when they are once discharged. The effect of these three aspects on prisoners’ rehabilitation is a catalyst for reducing recidivism both short and long term. Given
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points, countries can have a great tool in order to shape everyday
life
safer and features full even for former criminalists too. Living in a denouncement free world can be a fruitful and nurturing foundation for a bright future.
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