IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

Although more and more people read news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #internet #newspapers #source
Technology is a useful servant but a dangerous master. an enormous section of society prefers to look over the information on the online platform but periodicals will invariably the most not worthy inception of news. I tend to agree with
this
 belief. I think that newspapers stand as the daily routine part of an individual's life. ideas articulated
further
 in
this
 discourse will support my stand and at the same time highlight certain Contradictory notions that others in the community might give birth to. The primary reason for my belief is a daily habit. Nowadays, not only senior people but
also
 youngster has
also
 read the newspaper on an everyday basis. It
also
 contains the local news which is not available on the internet.
Furthermore
, additional extra awareness gains by the involved magazines which attached to the press.
For instance
, in
this
 contemporary globe, utmost of the individual has a smartphone and internet connection in their home.
Although
 the newspaper is in one's residence.
On the other hand
, there are selves in the community who are of the notion that digitalization is one of the possible reason for
this
 belief is that the internet has been bygone the shine of periodical. publishers have their website and application which were made by the particular software company and
also
 they provide a free soft copy of the newspaper on their online platform because of it people shouldn't waste money on hard copy
for example
, if a person gets information without wasting a penny
then
 why one's give some amount for the same. To conclude, there surely are those in the society who seem to be convinced with the fact that the views of newspapers will be extinct in nearest future and they assumingly have all the right reasons to back their conviction. I,
however
, am of the firm opinion that newspapers will always be a part of mankind's life as a family member.
Submitted by kpanchal197 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: