In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

The student wanted to get
degree
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a degree
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from their university in the past time.
However
, these days
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a number
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of facilities to
study
in other countries. The pros, cons and
view point
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viewpoint
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about it are mentioned in
following
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paragraphs.
Education
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The education
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sector plays an essential role for each
nation
. Nowadays
number
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a number
the number
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of people want to
study
in
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apply
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abroad and
this
thing has several advantages. The
first
and main advantage is,
students
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,students
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become more knowledgable.Different nations have their different education system so because of that
students
choose that country which
become
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becomes
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more beneficial for them.
For example
, Google surveyed that,
last
year 80% of the automobile
students
select Germany for their
advance
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education because Germany is on top
for
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of
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automobile
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the automobile
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sector.
Moreover
,
students
can learn western culture
also
. It affects
of
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their behaviour
in
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on
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the positive side.
Additionally
, they can learn several languages.
However
, there are some disadvantages at some extant.
First
of all, when student
prefer
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prefers
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to
study
in
different
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the different
a different
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nation
they use their talent for that
nation
in which they
goes
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go
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and it is
major
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a major
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drawback for their born
nation
. The
second
cons
is
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are
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,
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apply
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when
students
apply for advanced courses in different nations so they
also
provide
lot
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a lot
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of economic growth to that nations.
For instance
, Times of India recently surveyed that, Canadian embassy grow their economical growth at 25% compared to
last
year because of international
students
. To conclude,
students
become more intelligent with the advance
study
is important but their talent is
also
essential for their born
nation
. I personally believe that
,
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students
should use their knowledge for their
nation
to grow the country’s economy.
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