More and more students are moving to foreign countries for higher studies. Do its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, youngsters are very concerned about their tertiary
education
because their whole life is dependent on that.In my perspective , the merits of
this
notion outnumber its
demirts
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demerits
demits
and will explain in
this
essay. On the one hand, there are many advantages of brain drain ,
firstly
, it
broaden
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the horizons of students ,as in many nations the governments are not providing quality academics to students , so for the sake of attaining proper studies , young ones are moving to
another
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another country
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countries
.
For example
, in
India
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many state authorities like Punjab and Haryana are not providing good facilities in
education
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sector and due to
this
tutees are shifting to
another
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another country
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countries
for getting proper
education
and it is very beneficial for their entire life because of advancement in competition in every educational field .
Secondly
, it
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as a boon for students to do
jobs
in foreign
countries
, as we
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in many
countries
people are
strullgling
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struggling
for finding occupations .To exemplify , in 2008 the reporters of The Tribune newspaper took a survey in Pakistan and they concluded that around 40% of individuals were unemployed but after moving to overseas
countries
they easily find
jobs
according to their taste and it is very helpful for them to earn money for meeting their both ends .
Hence
, foreign
countries
are providing better amenities in
education
and in
jobs
. On the opposite side , in my
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there is one disadvantage behind
this
scenario. As we all know that
college going
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scholars are the back of the society and they are
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ones who have the abilities to take part in the development of a particular country and if they are going to
another areas
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another area
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and it
also
affect the economy of that country.
For example
,
last
year India
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heavy
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loss in the economy because approximately 5 lakhs of
dewellers
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dwellers
jewellers
were shifted in Canada and Australia. To conclude , I believe that in
this
era ,
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number of masses are doing higher study
couses
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courses
causes
in
another nations
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because of lack of availabilities in
educational
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field and it is
also
helpful for doing
jobs
in that areas.So it has immense benefits .
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