Today digital technology allows people to share all aspects of their lives on social media. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Recently, globalization has been attended by societies and people's lives can be indicated in social
media
by using technology that in my opinion , it would be as merit . In the following essay , the reason for my agreement with
this
idea and its disadvantage will be discussed. The cause of having a positive view about sharing
life
events by using
electronic
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gadget in social networks would be despite the fact that there are distances between families and relationships , they can be familiar with each other whenever they intend. ,
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Moreover
if folk visit each other , it will make them more happy and satisfied .
For instance
, a person who studies abroad can not show her feelings and energy to her family unless by sending or outing bar photo
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social
media
.
Therefore
as the result of modern devices , the public is able to illustrate their times and lives to friends and other people that creates a pleasant satisfaction and a positive influence on people
life
. Decreasing calmness is the only drawback of sharing our
life
with others by technology.
Furthermore
, our
life
aspects can be as private information.
Also
, the more information we share with others , the more abusing of us will happen .
For example
, it is reported from news in the world that amount of cybercriminals have been increased because of
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from the public data and photos which are shown on the online network wandering
such
as Instagram .
Therefore
, indicating aspects of our lives in social
media
will be a case of abusing and it will heart to our mental safety and tranquillity. In conclusion , in my view,
however
some crimes in the technological world and sharing activity in the
media
would hurt to our calmness , it has a positive effects on society satisfaction in their
life
by observing their families and friends when it is impossible to see them face to face.
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