A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

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se Lunar Year, which is the most vital festival in China. What Chinese people
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ormally have during these few days will be included in my presentation. I reckon audiences will be attracted by the preparation part as several fascinating activities they have not heard
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ut before will be shown in
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steners must be curious about what special food is a
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pants will perform before me and what time I need to arrive at the site. If I prepare the PPT and a clip of video, will you have the equipment to play them? If you would like to discuss my speech further, I would be delighted to come to your office to meet you. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Nina Guan
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