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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In contemporary times, the number of
news
 involves violence or natural disaster which is informed throughout the media.
Nevertheless
, people have different view about the media ought to restrict
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plenty of bad
news
 revealed due to the fact that it is able to affect our lives. It seems to me that bad
news
 has to show to the community in order to
population
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 can aware of what the world is happening
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these days. I will prove
this
 issue clearly. There
is
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reasons why people should not reduce bad information on the media.
First
 justification, the amount of concerns is occurring across the world
such
 as crime rate, natural disasters, polluted environment and so on. We have a right to perceive bad
news
 to avoid dangerous circumstances. Take the example of, the pandemic is spreading over the world
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this
 time.
As a result
, there is a significant increase in the number of the death rate.
Therefore
, notification of bad
news
 plays a vital role in our lives. It supports citizens who are able to protect themselves to avoid the risk based on the notification as well as improving the awareness of a severe issue that
need
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 to address.
Secondly
, climate condition conspicuously change.
Hence
, it is necessary for informing
to
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audiences, especially the travel agency so that they can justify appropriate diary for customers to avoid any risks during the trips
On the other hand
, it is no denying that bad
news
 may impact
on
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human’s activities on the daily basis. It is caused that anxiety, frighten or fear of bad thing can appear to them. To sum up, I am in favour of reporting all information which society needs to know .
although
this
 information is so bad, it can help the community unanimously handle these problems
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