Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit, others say it is not good to expliot them. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Although
it is sometimes said that using animals
for our interest is fine, while others take it as exploitation of them. In my opinion, I consider that it is not fair to exploit animals
as it has severe consequences on future generations.
On the one hand, some people think that there is no harm in using animals
as it is quite beneficial in our daily life. In other words
, animals
have always been used to serve mankind since the advent of time, helping us in all walks of life. In the olden days, they were used by humans to plough their fields, to keep them warm during winters and more commonly as a food source. Consequently
, In modern times, with the arrival of modern technologies animals
are genetically enhanced and more resourceful than ever.
On the other hand
, many people believe that in this
day and age, animals
are exploited to cope up with their ever-growing demand and I agree. Almost all the industries are using animals
in their various product lines, mass production of animals
to fuel the need has made advanced genetic researchers build upscaled powerhouses to produce various species in a controlled environment, talking away their basic living rights. Another reason is that this
exploitation affects the natural mutation of animal species, resulting in a decreasing number of such
species and eventually endangering their presence.
In conclusion, people may have varying opinion on whether we should use animals
for our benefits or not, I think that nowadays animals
are exploited more than in previous times which will make them scarce in near future.Submitted by Bilal on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite