Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous attempts of
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good
producers
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to promote awareness of their products lead to advertisements
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everywhere and become an essential part of today's world. Some people even argue that
advitising
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advertising
brings an immense amount of benefits to us. I totally agree with
this
point of view and believe that efforts to increase the use of
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product
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very advantageous.
First
of all,
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advertising
prevents any
perspective
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business from being unknown. Alternatively speaking ,all the interesting and newly produced products will
guaranteely
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guarantee
guaranteed
tested and assessed by the consumers albeit it entails some labour.
Thus
, the world will always be aware of every innovative
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that some people
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.
For example
, without
advirtisiments
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advertisements
many of
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today's brands
such
as KFC or SportMaster would be left unspotted to the public ,
consequently
, leading them to meet their end.
Secondly
, promoting the popularity of products can be greatly lucrative to the producers themselves.
That is
, paying some amount of financial resources to amplify the demand of their good,
therefore
, raising its
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around the world making a big profit. A clear example is
Nike
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the Nike
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company ,which pays
enormous
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amount of money to the football stars
such
as Cristiano Ronaldo or Neymar who magnifies the fame of the company by simply wearing clothes with
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specific logo. So,
advirtising
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advertising
is
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indispensable part of every business on the road to wealth. To conclude, I strongly support the point of view that emphasise the positive aspects of
advirtisements
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advertisements
advertisement
as they include not only personal well-being but
also
the advantages it brings to the society as a whole.
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