In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Naw days , it has been advertised by businesses that their production
in
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is
although
it can be a merit for companies , I think this
idea would be as
a disadvantage of advertising development . In the following essay , both of the Change preposition
apply
view
will be discussed.
Advertisements in businesses might be effective to attract customers. When a company advertises for Change to a plural noun
views
it's produces
which are emphasised Change the verb form
it produces
that is
new , many of people
can be familiar with the new services or tools . This
kind of notice encourages the public to purchasing
goods and trying on the services. When technological devices Change the verb form
purchase
has
been attended by Change the verb form
have
people
around the world and if an organization advertises a a
new electronical Remove the redundancy
apply
gadjet
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gadget
gadgets
such
as an intelligent mobile phone , people
will be unattractive to buy it. It can therefore
be argued that the more marketings do notice for their produces , the more customer they can Change the verb form
be had
be have
.
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behave
On the other hand
, it may be a negative development for people
. When there is a competition between marketing to take people
attention to organisation attendances , some unrealistic display in some businesses would be appeared
. Change to the active voice
appear
have appeared
For example
, some customers order the
new erasers which the Correct article usage
apply
durability
materials used in the production are advertised by a stationary company while in Replace the word
durable
real
situation the erasers do not erase clearly . Add an article
a real
Consequently
, business
might do unreal advertisements to compare whit other rivals in the same industry which create sham notices .
In conclusion , in my view , if business Add an article
the business
a business
introduce
their new productions to Change the verb form
introduces
people
, they will be able to successful
in their industry. Replace the word
succeed
Also
, as a demerit
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,demerit
a
comparative marketing is observed between companies which can be Remove the article
apply
cuse
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cause
of
doing some advertisements Change preposition
by
that is
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