Not enough student chose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What's the effects on society?

Science
subjects
in university are useful for society development but difficult to be persisted. It is reasonable that student prone to chose other
subjects
instead
of
science
but will do harm to our society in the near future. There are a couple of reasons that
students
do not want to choose
science
subjects
.
First
, the prospective occupations of
science
subjects
are limited because the studying aspects are some frontier problem that scarcely related corporations are focusing
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profiting.
For example
the subject of space
science
,
it
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is a long term research aspect that rare company is affordable.
As a result
, most
of
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students
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will try to pursue
a
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academic position in a university which is a very tired and difficult job, not to mention that the positions are
also
very limited and quite competitive.
Second
,
science
subjects
require a solid foundation of mathematics knowledge.
For example
, linear algebra and statistic courses require a clear understanding of
basis
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mathematics that learned from higher school, but most of the education in higher school
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without
a
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clear guidance for student to realise mathematics--they just focus on the final exam.
Third
, most of the
science
courses are very boring, some of them are too abstract and hard to find any implementation in our daily life.
However
, society
need
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science
to extend the boundary of the world
such
as to develop
a
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essential healthcare system or to reduce carbon emission. If without sufficient
students
studying
science
subjects
, a direct impact in the future, is that the development or innovation of products
are
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hardly satisfying our increasing demand.
For instance
, it is extremely urgent to develop a more effective treatment of cancer, but few
students
want to explore inside.
In addition
, a
potential
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negative effect is that the manpower system will become unbalance and the job opportunities will become more and more competitive. Many
students
have to face
with
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jobless problems after they graduated.
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