Some people get into debit by buying thing they do not need and cannot afford. What is the reason for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Many
people
using
debt
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debit
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cards to acquire possession which
are
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is
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unnecessary and out of their reach. There
are
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is
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number
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a number
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of reasons which I will
discussing
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in the
upcoiming
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upcoming
paragraph and
decribing
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describing
the
resonable
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reasonable
solution for
such
situation. In
this
fast paced
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senario
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scenario
everyone like to obtain expensive clothes and luxury life.
Nodoubt
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No doubt
that these development make
the
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human life easy but
on the other hand
it is a kind of burden.
Firstly
,
people
using
debit
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a debit
the debit
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card
for getting new and high-priced possession for taking and uploading pictures on various social media
such
as Facebook,Instagram,TikTok and so on.
Secondly
, the significant growth of many elite
Malls
, that attract the masses in spending money on
jewellry
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jewellery
,branded clothes and gadgets.
Lastly
, with the apply of
crdit
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credit
card
people
who have
average
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an average
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range of salary will
also
obtain branded things.
For buying
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unnessary
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unnecessary
things using
ths
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this
the
debit will lead
a
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to a
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serious
problem
for many of the
card holders
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cardholders
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. There are several things that
people
could do to mitigate the
problem
. One of several
reason
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reasons
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is that there should be provided
a
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with a
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clear regulation about
credit
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a credit
the credit
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card
that must be followed by banks and financial institution, regarding the process to get a credit
card
. To ensure that every
individuals
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individual
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must have a
limit
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limited
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amount of access to
credit
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a credit
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card
according to
its
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their
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income.
Moreover
, for adding more
malls
into the cities
instead
, the government
shoud
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should
build more parks and children playgrounds.
Therefore
,
people
should have more options for entertainments
besides
going to shopping
malls
. To be concluded, it is true that
people
facing
many
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any
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problem
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problems
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with
the
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debt for obtaining luxury and fancy goods. To solve
this
problem
,
government
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the government
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should build more recreational parks or area where
people
shoud
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should
spend their time
instead
of
malls
.
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