Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

In the
last
decades, we have shown an increasing growth in communication applications which are mainly used over the internet. The usage of these applications,
such
as Facebook, Twitter, Snapchat, ...and etc, make some
People
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people
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much closer to the world,
in contrast
,
make
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makes
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other
people
separated.
This
essay will discuss both sides and introduce my point of view. On the one hand, the existence of the internet in our
lives
,
make
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makes
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people
easily exchange their
news
around the world.
For example
, if one has a special occasion, he can
share
his party with his family and his
friend
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friends
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even if they are living in a different country.
Thus
, it is clear how the internet has made
people
feel close together.
On the other hand
, it is
popularly
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that
people
tend to
share
their
news
, their special parties, and their interests with other
people
who live away and who do not have any relation with them, but at the same time, they tend to keep themselves away from their neighbours or their
relatives
.
In other words
, they isolate themselves locally
however
, they do not mind sharing their
news
with anyone who is outside their countries, cities, and towns. I expect that because they do not want to allow
anyone
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of their
relatives
to interfere in their
lives
, since the others can not affect their
lives
because they are already outside their home town. In my opinion, I totally agree with both points of view, and
that is
because I have noticed that most
people
tend to hide their private
lives
from their
relatives
or their friends to protect their privacy. So, most of the time, they keep themselves away from their neighbourhood,
relatives
and friends. They,
for instance
, virtually
share
their updates with their family who
lives
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live
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far away, but they do not prefer to
share
the same updates with their close family, neighbours, or friends in real life. so the
people
who
are
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live
part
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far
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away feel they are close when they exchange their updates,
in contrast
, the close
people
feel isolated from each other when they do not take part in
relatives
' events in real life.
To conclude
, sometimes, we can not understand why
people
prefer sharing their
news
with those who are living away from them, but they absolutely do not like sharing the same
news
with other
people
who are close to them, and they tend to isolate themselves
local
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locally
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.
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