Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is affirmed that several population’s
source
of Change to a plural noun
sources
information
manages people
’s attitudes and highly influence their opinion
on a certain topic. Besides
, this
situation is almost irreversible. I disagree with the prompt and in this
essay, I will justify my opinion
.
To begin
with, mass media
use powerful communication’s strategy
to convince Fix the agreement mistake
strategies
people
, even though they cannot control their behaviour neither
a Rewrite the sentence
cannot control their behaviour either
can control their behaviour neither
person
Replace the word
personal
opinion
. Journalists are very well-trained professionals and they use several of
neurolinguistics strategies to capture the spectator’s attention. Change preposition
apply
As a result
, the way that individuals receive that information
certainly influence how they act and live, however
is totally a person’s responsibility to deal with that. Unfortunately, the
society cannot rely on their way to provide Correct article usage
apply
information
, because they might be too polemical over an irrelevant subject. What can be done is being
aware that they are trying to dictate their position.
Change the verb form
to be
Although
the mass media
might be strong opinion makers
and quite persuasive, Add a hyphen
opinion-makers
people
must be more self-informant to avoid being played by the media
. To explain, the
society needs to learn how to filter the Correct article usage
apply
information
and study parallelly the content that is
discussed. Therefore
, they will not let themselves be captured by the beautiful speech this
Change the determiner
these
people
have. To illustrate, in Brazil, people
are becoming more engaged in certain country’s issues Correct your spelling
through
though
social Correct your spelling
through
media
, because there, it is possible to have fast information
and from wider specialists. Thus
, all that persuasive position the media
has is not
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with what is being affirmed because even though the mass media
are extremely influential because they are a majority source of people
’s information
, they cannot control how people
behave neither what kind opinion
they might have. They are influential because they use communication’s strategies and Change preposition
of opinion
people
need to be more self-aware and engaged to
important matters.Change preposition
in
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