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Scary Zebra a few seconds ago The diagram elucidates formation volcanos in Hawaiian islands, which is located in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. At a cursory glance, it is clearly seen that the development of the Hawaiian island group
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been originated under the ocean over millions of years. The
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years ago. In the
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it can be visible the development of the youngest volcano, which is forming
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spot, which is surrounded by dense solid rock. The centre is stable.
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chain of islands and the shift is roughly seven to nine cm every year. Copy Chat Send File \ ';
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