Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

In our current

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the

internet

has become an essential tool in our

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and

that is

because of its tremendous pros especially for

students

.

However

,

next

to it is benefits there is

also

a negative side to it.

Therefore

, I agree with the statement that

the

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internet

educational usage should be restricted. In

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I am going to discuss the

advantages

and the

disadvantages

of the use of

internet

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among

students

. It is true that the

internet

has many

advantages

for

students

. Yet, the

disadvantages

outweigh the

advantages

when it comes to

students

and,

that is

due to many reasons which I will talk about .

First

,

students

who have

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open access to the

internet

all the time tend to become more reliant on the

internet

.

For example

,

instead

of thinking of new ways to solve

certain

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problem

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that they are having during a school project or

a

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homework, they immediately turn to a prepared answer

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the

internet

and, that could reduce the level of competition among

students

which will lead to a lazy and unproductive generation.

Additionally

, it will limit

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problem solving

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skills that will definitely need in their future career.

Second

, one of the most threatening cons of

this

phenomenon is that some

students

could start developing a plagiarism

problem

through being used to copying other people work from the

internet

and,

that is

a very dangerous

problem

because of its effect on student ethics which is an important aspect of the hiring process.

Next

to the

disadvantages

of the use of the

internet

among

students

, it has

also

plenty of

advantages

such

as,

students

who are leaning more towards the artistic path,using the

internet

can be very beneficial during their art classes because it will allow them to dive into many creative pictures and scenes which will inspire them and boost their imagination.

In addition

, using the

internet

by

students

could help them explore new techniques and it will expand their perspective on the many things,

such

as, the latest technology which could open the doors for new inventions. In conclusion, using the

internet

has become an essential thing in our life.

however

, side to

it

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is benefits

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there

is

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also

several

disadvantages

for it.

Therefore

, I agree with the statement of limiting the use of it among

students

, and

that is

for the discussed reasons.