some people think it better to choose friends who always have same opinion as them, others believe it is good to have friends who sometime disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in reference to
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published in your magazine
last
week on my
town
, Pratap Nagar. It is a beautiful
town
, on the bank of
river
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the river
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in northern India. The
article
published
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last
week in your magazine about
the
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my
town
. I
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red
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read
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the
article
completely and information regarding the culture and tradition of
this
place has been presented nicely but
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outskirts area has been depicted as a pile of rubbish, which is
a false information
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.
This
town
is famous for the old traditional temple and people from different
part
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of
world
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pay visit to
this
place each year. It
bring
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lot
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of financial benefit to the resident of the
town
and the local authorities of the temple.
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Malicious
Malacious
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image of the
town
through your
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will disturb the sentiment of the pilgrims.
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, hurt the local businessmen,
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income
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on the visitor's money. It is my humble request to your team to visit my
town
again and kindly verify the facts. Residents of the
town
are very particular regarding the cleanliness of the place. After your satisfaction, kindly republish the correct statement in the
next
edition. I am looking forward to a quick resolution to
this
important
mattar
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matter
. your's sincerely sign name
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