The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with internet and what solutions can you suggest??

The invention of the computer and the
internet
is one of the biggest achievements of technology. While it has become a part of our day to day life by enabling us to share, store and analyze the
information
, it has
also
created some issues.
This
essay will discuss problems associated with the
internet
and provide solutions for the same. The major drawbacks of the
internet
are
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increase in the number of
cyber crimes
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and
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the loading
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of false
information
on it. Lack of adequate knowledge about how to secure online
information
can be very dangerous sometimes.
This
can be explained by online money laundering scams managed by professional hackers who are extremely good at keeping no trace of crime performed. Punjab National Bank scam is a very good example of
internet
fraud.
Similarly
, people reading false
information
over the
internet
are easily misled into believing something which is not rational and
this
/ it can affect an individual very badly.
For example
, one of my friends read about a diet and exercise program online and started following it. Soon after
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she started having issues of hypertension and severe backache. So it is extremely necessary to control the
information
present on the
internet
. Improvement of
cyber security
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cybersecurity
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along with basic awareness programs to prevent
cyber
crimes needs to be a part of government
initiative
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initiatives
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.
For example
, face recognition or retinal scan for digital transactions and no sharing of security
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with anybody can prevent these attacks to a certain extent. People should be made aware of the dangers of sharing their personal
information
and account details with others. Thorough scrutinisation under strict laws should be done for all the
information
on the
internet
.
Information
without proof or evidence needs to be removed and banned from
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database
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under
cyber
law enforcement. The
internet
is a miracle baby of technology. Though it has tremendous advantages, one cannot ignore serious problems associated with it. There are some solutions mentioned above
which
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can control these problems.
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