Some people think that children should be taught at school about how to be good parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fostering

parents

who are capable to raise healthy

children

seems

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to be of high importance. It is believed that schools should shoulder the responsibility of teaching parental

matters

to

children

. I completely disagree since

children

should concentrate on other

matters

during their childhood lives like education and recreational

activities

, and

parents

are more effective in

this

regard. Regarding education,

children

are supposed to acquire knowledge about the very basic aspects of science and literature.

This

could be markedly tough for them since they had not had any relative experience in

this

regard. So, they should be prevented from occupying with other subjects in order to be more efficient in education while learning parental

matters

could be either attractive or confusing for them. In doing so, they would fail to pay ample attention to studying.

For example

,

children

might indulge in considering themselves as

parents

if they learnt about the responsibilities of

parents

.

Thus

, schools’ subjects should be thoroughly related to science. As far as sport is concerned,

children

should

used

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to participate in these kinds of

activities

regularly since their childhood. People

are generally condemn

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to engage in sedentary

activities

in

this

modern world which

has

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deprived them of getting enough exercise.

This

has led to increasing numbers of people who are struggling with either physical or mental disorders. Statistics indicate that about 40% of adult citizens suffer from diseases

which

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are the consequences of physical

activities

.

Children

should be forced to exercise on a daily basis to consider it as an essential part of their adult lives to protect themselves against some illnesses.

Therefore

, investing quality time in sport is likely to be more important than learning about being a good parent.

Finally

,

children

should learn these

matters

from their

parents

. Since

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care givers

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are the ones

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who

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children

spend the most time

with

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and,

consequently

, would learn valuable lessons about

life based

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on their

behaviors

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.

This

could render the

activities

of schools fruitless if they were not matched with

parents

’ attitudes.

This

disagreement could be detrimental to the perceptions of

children

about being

parents

.

Thus

. Merely one group should be responsible

about

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teaching parental

matters

to

children

which

is

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inevitably

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care givers

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. In conclusion, I disagree that

children

should learn about being good

parents

at schools. Since there are countless numbers of subjects that should be valued at that

ages

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which are more influential and

parents

have more impacts on

children

in

this

regard.