Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Serious crimes need capital
punishment
so that the offender are
unable to get involved in the Change the verb form
is
crime
in the future. However
, If they want to stop the acts of violation in the future then
it would be better to forget him and judge him for a change .
Overall, I agree with the fact that punishment
is the way
to avoid the crime
to be increased and hence
our lives become more secure. If the wrongdoer wants to be a good man
and there is a particular financial or personal problem that led him to
the wrong Change preposition
apply
way
, then
it would be the
nice option to forgive him and try to solve the problem he Correct article usage
a
have
. Change the verb form
has
Although
by this
way
, some bad man
may become Fix the agreement mistake
men
effective
part of Add an article
an effective
the
society Correct article usage
apply
but
some do not bring themselves to the right path because they are very much used to Remove the conjunction
apply
of
it. The person that _ involved in the Change preposition
apply
crime
and never try
to stop the law-breaking act should be punished in Change the verb form
tries
the
extremely serious Correct article usage
an
way
. However
, it totally depends on the nature of crime
. Some Add an article
the crime
crime
led to Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
a
capital Remove the article
apply
punishment
and some may require a small penalty. The law-making institutions are responsible to bring the bad man
to the right level of punishment
that he deserves. If there is weak legislation to properly handle the offender, it may become our society less secure for the good man
. The government should be the responsible authority to provide a secure and better state to live.
Laws should be implemented and executed in the most proper Change preposition
in.
way
that do
not allow the offender to commit violent acts or to break the law in any Change the verb form
does
way
and to any extent. To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state runner to stop people to involved in crime
. It may be done through solving the problems of the people that led them to commit that violence
act or by the Replace the word
violent
punishment
accordingly
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite