It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

One of the greatest concerns we come across these days is the lack of connection amongst family members. it is believed that in the past people were much happier and healthier because of the strong bonding they shared with their kins. I would like to list out few reasons that
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led the families to move apart in
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, the advancement in
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technology has made people in
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families
to
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divert their attention and love from their
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ones towards gadgets.
for instance
, children in a
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to spend their quality time with gadgets and not with their parents and siblings. At times we see parents spending most of their time
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in front
of the screen as part of their work or leisure.
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, In
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and expensive world , it has become a necessity for both the parents to work to meet their daily needs.
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has caused the children to find an alternative path to deal with their boredom. They find solace behind with gadgets than with their family.
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is again a treat to a family bonding. As an individual, it's our duty to learn to set our priorities right. We should never allow any kind of advancements in technology to control our minds. Each
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member
of the family should make an attempt to manage their time effectively. They can try to have
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at least
One meal a day together.
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would help the families to connect back and maintain a healthier relationship. In conclusion, though it has become a trend to ease our work with the help of technology,
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on the other hand
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our
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to see to it that we are not
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our relationship with our family members in the long run.
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