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The household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

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The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in the
UK
,
France
 and
Germany
 from 2005 to 2015. In 2005, the recycling rates of the
UK
 and
Germany
 were 35% and 20% respectively.
Germany
's
rate
 increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding
France
rate
 in 2009 and recycling almost 60%
in
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 the end of the period. In the
meantime
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 the percentage of recycled waste in the
UK
 grew to 40% in 2007 and
then
 remain steady until 2019.
During
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 2009 to 2011 it
experience
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 a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015. In early 2005, the recycling
rate
 of
France
 was the highest among these three countries.
However
, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2003.
Then
, there was a growth of 10% in 2005 but
France
 recycling
rate
 was the lowest
in
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 the end of the period. Overall, we can see that the recycling rates of the
UK
 and
Germany
 showed an upward trend while the percentage of recycled waste in
France
 experience a downward trend.
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