Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
One of the largest issues all over the world nowadays is the concern towards the
environment
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environment
, I personally do not think that overpopulation
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environment
due to exhaust fumes that will result in deforestation. The problem of this
is not that people
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