Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal v. 1

Countries

should allocate more of their funding

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manufacturing materials and goods. I partially agree with

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statement. It is true that

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due to population growth it is necessary to increase

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of these items in order to meet the market demands.

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, if

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process is bad managed it might lead to overproduction,

thus

damaging the environment. Population growth requires that

countries

produce more goods and materials to provide every citizen with what they need.

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is extremely important for basic goods used to satisfy human requirements that are needed to survive, like food and shelter. In

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countries

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Africa, it is crucial for the government to increase the production of the essentials to make sure the survival of their inhabitants.

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applies not only to the fight against poverty

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but

also

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more materials to build sufficient settlements for everyone. As

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to it, in other

countries

where fundamental needs are more than fulfilled,

this

industry tends to produce more and more so that

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profit is much higher, without consideration for the environment. Those processes often take place in factories or other types of

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that require fuel and energy to function.

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, if they are manufactured when not needed

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will contribute to rising Co2 emissions and worsen global pollution. To conclude, it is important that government makes sure that everyone is well-fed and has a secure house.

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, the

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of products should not outweigh the needs of the population and cause damage to the environment, when it could be avoided in the

first

place.