If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught , not born with, the problems that come from them can be resolved. Discuss the view and give our own opinion.

#racism #xenophobia #attitudes

this

modern era,

racism

and

xenophobia

are the

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of public interest and concern.

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believed by some

people

that it is one of the most serious global problems and it can be resolved if we are taught. I agree with

this

view.

Racism

and

xenophobia

are popular attitudes in

this

term and age. There are many reasons behind these behaviours. First and foremost, every child has been taught about behaviours since they were

borned

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born

. So they always behave like their family.

Secondly

, the society around them

also

affects their attitudes.

For example

, in the same region and working environment, when all

people

have discomfort with some

people

like the white hate the black ones in Europe, we easily acquired the same mindset.

Therefore

racism

gradually forms in children's minds, which has a bad effect on the treatment of

people

all over the world. If

racism

and

xenophobia

are taught effectively both

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the children’s family and school,

then

it can be solved rapidly. Children can have knowledge about foreigners and other

people

from different regions. When children all over the world learn the same way, in the future, they will not lead to becoming racists and

xenophobia

. Everyone can feel more comfortable with others and sometimes we can set the situation of equality. Gradually,

racism

and

xenophobia

will not exist in the world. In conclusion,

racism

and

xenophobia

cause many problems but if parents and schools have a good direction in teaching students attitudes, it will be the best solution for

this

difficult question.

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If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught , not born with, the problems that come from them can be resolved. Discuss the view and give our own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion

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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. Ask for time off and explain why. Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work. Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence.