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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share the awful experience of the partakers for lunch served during my company Maxis's all-day meeting event, which I organised on 27/08/2021 in your
hotel
.
However
, the members admired the beautiful
hotel
building, spacious meeting hall, and new
hotel
reception. On top of that, They appreciated the staff courteous and supportive presence as well. The meal was stale and improperly prepared, according to all of the visitors. The meat was tough and smelled terrible. Following the event, one of our coworkers experienced a mild stomach ache.
Furthermore
, we told the
hotel
ahead of time that several of our teammates are vegetarians, yet there were few vegetarian options;
as a result
, they had to have their lunch outside.
This
criticism should be given to the culinary crew, in my opinion. Even if the
hotel
has a gorgeous structure and very excellent amenities, if the visitors don't enjoy the food, the
hotel
's overall rating will suffer. To increase the dish's quality, they must utilise fresh meat that has been thoroughly roasted in the oven.
In addition
, the
hotel
should keep a record of all directions issued. I hope that you will consider my complaint and recommendations seriously. Yours sincerely,
Submitted by jainlokesh2 on

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