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Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that numerous people are immigrating to
foreign
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 land for overseas employment purposes.
Nevertheless
, whilst settling abroad has many advantages for their
children
, it can
also
 be detrimental for them. In
this
 essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and explain why I believe that the arguments in
favor
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 of living in another country
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 stronger. People migrate to foreign nations because they want a better life for their
family
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 and
children
. Commencing with the most salient reason,
children
 get exposed to a new culture which is beneficial in many ways. It fosters their social and emotional capabilities.
Moreover
,
children
 living abroad
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 better learning opportunities and education compared to underdeveloped countries they migrate from which helps
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 competent.
However
, relocating
children
 to a new place is undesirable
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 so for many reasons. One of them being these youngers can feel stressed when dealing with a new reality.
Therefore
,
this
 shift can be a challenge for their future.
Secondly
,
children
 can feel isolated since they will not have friends around them. They will need to build new relations and get acquainted with
children
 which will impose a new problem due to
language
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 barrier which can be overcome slowly. According to a recent study published by the University of Chicago, competency increases employment chances on average by 150%. In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in a different country positively affects
children
 in all aspects. Acquiring new languages, and
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open minded
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 and tolerant personality are just few examples of the many possible benefits.
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