Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The modern world is filled with all kinds of temptations, and without
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strictness or
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discipline
, people can easily be spoiled and become a burden for
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society. Unfortunately, people are not born with these characteristics, but they can only gather them by starting training from a very young age. There are two schools of thought about
this
matter. Many people believe that
teachers
should be responsible for educating
children
about self-
discipline
, while others insist that
parents
should be the
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in charge.
This
essay will discuss both
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of
views
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and conclude with a personal opinion on teaching
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discipline
to
children
. On the one hand, others including myself think that
parents
should
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the lead in teaching self-control to
children
. It is unrefutable that
parents
have more impact on
children
compared to their
teachers
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since
children
spend most of their time at home and tend to imitate their
parents
behavior
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.
Hence
, it is
parents’s
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responsibility to perform good characteristics around their
children
so that they can follow the right path.
Moreover
, because
children
learn
discipline
from their
parents
at their will, not by
forced
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, it is easier for them to absorb
this
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necessary
characteristic.
On the other hand
, many believe that
teachers
play a crucial role in educating
discipline
to
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children
.
Children
tend to listen to the
advises
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from their
teachers
since they have high
respects
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toward
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them.
Therfore
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Therefore
,
this
will give lecturers the ability to encourage
children
to practice the right
behavior
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.
However
,
teachers
also
have to transfer knowledge to
children
to keep up with the syllabus,
thus
it is extremely difficult for them to balance between educating and teaching
discipline
. In conclusion, I personally believe that
parents
should be responsible for teaching
children
discipline
and self-control
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since it is more effective compared to
teachers
.
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