some people think that children should be given lesson of how to manage money in the school? do you agree or disagree?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial education
  • value of money
  • budgeting
  • saving
  • financial goals
  • planning
  • curriculum
  • responsible spending habits
  • debt prevention
  • parental responsibility
  • educational requirements
  • commercial interests
  • mathematics integration
  • social studies
  • bridging the gap
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