In today's world,some prefer online courses whereas others prefer classroom teaching. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present world,
classroom
learning involves physical interaction with a teacher, while online learning transfers
this
component to
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environment.
In contrast
,
human
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the human
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appears real in front of the
audiance
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audience
in the face to face method
instead
of human visible only through the device
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screens
screen
such
as computers and mobile phones.
However
, in the current situation ,most
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students
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the students
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tend to use
internet
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to find new
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rather than the
classroom
. In
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I discuss both pros and cons of online distance learning processes.
Furthermore
,
this
is a digital era where the most advance technological
equipments
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use
to
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deferent
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purposes.
Firstly
, no need to travel and saving both money and time
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the common
advantages
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of online learning.
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of that,
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effective
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self motivation
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and
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to find
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answers and health effects are the prominent disadvantages. In short,there are negative and
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positive
to the learner who gets all the things to study
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online.
On the other hand
,
conventional
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classroom
method has both pros and cons too.
Moreover
,
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superiority over the online, collaboration with each other and developing social skills are some advantages.whereas
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some teachers give
favouration
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favouritism
towards specified students,no flexible time,old
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fashioned
environment background are the disadvantages.
Thus
, the above
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mentioned
mention
methods
also
have merits and
dismerits
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demerits
according to my perception. In summary, the processes given above has advantages and disadvantages to a person who
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knowledge. In
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personally
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I believe that
classroom
learning is more powerful than online learning.
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