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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue, whether it is better to provide
seperate
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separate
 education for
both
 genders or if it is better to allow boys and girls to attend mixed
schools
. In the following
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 I would like to discuss
both
 points of view. Personally, I am in favour of the letter view.
To begin
 with the bright side of
this
 issue, I believe, that attending mixed-sex education has many beneficial aspects.
For example
, it is crucial to let
kids
 socialize with
an
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opposite gender.
Moreover
, it is crucial to let them learn the difference in
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behaviour of
both
 genders. Socializing in
mixed
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a mixed
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 group of
kids
 is beneficial for the mental growth of an individual. It has been proven by a
reseearch
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research
 among 5 different mixed
schools
 in the United States, that not only are their
kids
 able to deal with daily situations better than
kids
 from separate
schools
, they were
also
 able to create healthier
realionships
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relationships
relationship
 during their teenage years.
On the other hand
, attending mixed
schools
 have
also
 some drawbacks. Teenagers start to explore their sexuality and are attracted by the other sex, which often leads to unwanted
distraction
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 from school duties. Many people
also
 argue, that it is easier to work with
kids
 from single-sex
clasrooms
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classrooms
,
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 because
both
 genders tend to have the same interests and hobbies, which,
on the other
hand
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 has never been proven. On the basis of the above discussion, I believe, that mixed
schools
 are better
preparation
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to
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 real-life situations and
that is
 why I agree with the statement, that
kids
 benefit more from
atttending
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attending
 mixed
schools
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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