Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
It is a precept amongst a large section of society that the primary source of joy is through acquiring monetary abundance. I completely disagree with the above statement and the below essay will be throwing light on how
money
tends to help people gain bliss in heart and also
about a few small things, that can bring real pleasure to anyone.
To begin
with, in today's world, prosperity has a direct connection with the accomplishments and the bank balance that, one has over a period of time. This
is deemed as the foremost support to showcase how blessed a person is in his/her life
. For instance
, one of our family friends has been successful in their family business. Owing to this
, they now have considerable finances.Consequently
, they have made material advancements as well. Hence
, money
is bound to bring prosperity in terms of things we can buy in this
world.
On the other hand
, there are small things in life
that are capable to bring astounding joy and pleasure to one's own life
. A tiresome day at the office followed by a blissful reception by a child can bring anyone back to life
. For example
, a simple chit-chat with elders at home to just listen to them can quench their desire. An outing with family can strengthen the bonds. All the aforementioned,
does not require a fortune. Remove the comma
apply
Thus
, rather than running behind money
, we should try to find happiness.
To conclude, mankind often falls into the deceitful trap of money
to harness pleasure. Instead
of this
, they should value relationships and become the reason for others delight. Therefore
, a bounty of money
can never bring joy but even a simple gesture can become a reason to be ecstatic.Submitted by jatinkochar1993 on
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