Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Safety
issues
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the major concern of the modern era. A few individuals claim that slow down the speed of
autombiles
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automobiles
such
as
cars
and bikes are
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terrific method to decrease
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the number of
road
accidents, but the opponents have conflicting views. That essay will
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discuss both
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views,
then
discuss my perspective about it in the subsequent paragraphs. The proponents of the
first
view said that people it is good to decrease the speed of vehicles in order to improve the
safety
on the
road
. In
this
way,
rider
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can easily stop their
cars
or bikes before crashing
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any other two or
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. As the result, neither will occur any mishappening
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road
nor any threat to life during riding on the vehicles. To cite an example,
Last
year, I was going to my town on my bike and at that time, there was fog in the surroundings, but I was riding my bike
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above the speed of
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forty
our
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meter
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per one hour.
Suddeny
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, a child came into my way, but I was
successfuly
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successfully
successful
stoped my bike since of low speed. The opponents of the
first
view claimed that there are other methods too to upgrade
road
safety
are ethier citizens should follow the traffic rules or Government should imply the
odd-even
rules for
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. In
this
law, one day only the
cars
who have
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number in the
last
should
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on the
road
as well as the
next
day for even number car.
Consequently
, it will lead to
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chances of happening any risk of life or probably reduces the possibilities of car
carshings
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crashing
with each other.
For instance
, in the year
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2019, the chief minister of
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,
Mr.
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Arwind
kezriwal
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Kejriwal
was implement
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the
odd-even
law for
cars
. After that, the
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of
cars
accidents were reduced by 25% according to the data of
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department. In conclusion, it is believed that
although
road
safety
will improve by the
declining
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in the speed of
motobikes
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motorbikes
and
cars
,
but
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odd-even
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the odd-even
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rule is
more
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a more
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effective method than it.
Therefore
, it is better to establish the
odd-even
rule for improving
the
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road
safety
rather than slowing the vehicles speed.
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