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Many people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

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Animals are beautiful
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 of god. Presently, an argument has been put forward that a myriad of efforts and
resources
 are spent on the conservation of wild
species
. In my opinion, saving the existence of wildlife is beneficial for mankind. Money and
resources
 being spent on national parks can be justified in many ways. The prime reason is that increase and decrease
in particular
species
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adversely
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 on ecosystem. to
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, if tigers are not poaching
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deers
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then
deers
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 will exceed, which will lead to
over grazing
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. Eventually,
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 may
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resedential
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residential
 areas. Another factor is that some
species
 generate revenue for
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 and
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 source of income for
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 public as well. To demonstrate it, the fur of
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 has a great value in
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 market as it is used for manufacturing
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winter clothes.
Along with
this
, body parts of some creatures are utilised in making
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medicines to cure many health hazards,in medical fields.
Therefore
, wild
species
 should be preserved
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msking
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making
 a balance in biodiversity. On the other side, despite
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spending funds and
resources
 on
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wild creatures, authority is supposed to take care of other sorts
such
 as climbing crime rates, burgeoning population, pollution, unemployment and many more.
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,
government
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 should pay
attenton
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attention
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 other things
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.
To conclude
, as per my above discussion, I opine that
although
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 had better spend the
resources
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 other issues, which are increasing day by day,
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wildlife and birds, especially endangered
species
 should be protected as much as possible because of their indispensable role in human life.
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task response
Ensure that the essay thoroughly addresses all aspects of the question and provides a balanced argument for both sides.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are well-presented. However, ensure that the body paragraphs are linked together more cohesively to improve the overall structure of the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • species extinction
  • wildlife conservation
  • sustainable development
  • ecosystem services
  • habitat destruction
  • endangered species
  • conservation efforts
  • natural heritage
  • human encroachment
  • poaching
  • genetic diversity
  • climate change
  • environmental stewardship
  • protection measures
  • wildlife sanctuary
  • biological significance
  • conservation biology
  • environmental advocacy
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