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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some feel that the
countryside
 is more conducive to a healthy lifestyle than the city. Though
cities
 offer modern hospitals, I am in agreement with
this
 sentiment as the
countryside
 encourages greater activity. Those who believe
cities
 are healthier point out the access to superior medical care. In most
cities
, it is possible to find a variety of hospitals specializing in subdivisions of medicine and staffed with the best professionals.
This
 is a result of urban populations, the demand for care, and the earning potential of
cities
.
In contrast
, in the
countryside
, there are fewer hospitals, with less modern facilities located
further
 apart. An individual with a chronic
health
 problem would naturally prefer to be in closer proximity to their primary healthcare provider.
Similarly
, in the event of an emergency
such
 as a car accident or heart attack, being in the city guarantees a higher chance of receiving quality care.
Nonetheless
, the situations above are exceptional and most individuals benefit more from
an
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active life in the
countryside
.
Cities
 residents are becoming increasingly sedentary and passive as the internet and services
such
 as food delivery applications enable less activity. In the
countryside
, individuals are more likely to walk to school, spend time with friends outdoors, play a variety of sports, and work a more physically demanding job. All these small instances of activity combined over the span of days, months, and years contribute to better overall conditioning and
health
.
This
 applies to physical and mental
health
 since
those outside
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 of
cities
 are less likely to be dependent on technology and suffer from concomitant anxiety disorders. In conclusion, despite the modern medical facilities present in
cities
, the less passive living in the
countryside
 makes it healthier generally. Individuals who prioritize
health
 should strongly consider living outside of an urban area
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