Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry?

It is sometimes seen that tourist attractions, including museums, important historical sites and prominent monuments, impose a higher

fee

for

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overseas travellers than the local people. I do not agree with

this

idea and believe that the charges should be exactly the same.   From a

perspective

, it might seem logical to charge foreign

tourists

more to enter a traditional and historical place as most of those monuments and establishments are state-owned and the government fund those from the tax they collect from the local residences. From

this

regard, many feel that local residences are already paying a portion of the

ticket

money

through the tax they pay to the government.

However

,

this

is a very narrow view and

this

arrangement dissatisfies the visiting

tourists

as many of them find it discriminatory. From a broader view, if more foreign travellers are encouraged to visit nationally important tourist attractions and important historical and cultural

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,

this

would bring more foreign

tourists

and

this

would ensure more earning from the tourism sector.

Furthermore

, it would help spread the national and cultural importance around the world. From

this

perspective

, collecting some extra

money

from the entrance

ticket

is a shortsighted step.  

Furthermore

, happy

tourists

encourage their immediate friends and family members to visit a country and some tourist attractions. If those

tourists

get the impression that they are being

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more

money

than the local people, they would psychologically feel unhappy and would share their dissatisfaction with others which would mean

less

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foreign

tourists

. Many

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and monuments are maintained by the

ticket

money

it collects and if the number of visiting

travelers

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decreased, it would be tough for the authority to maintain those important places. From

this

perspective

, having an equal entrance

fee

has a better impact. To conclude, from a broader

perspective

having the same

ticket

fee

, both for the residence and foreign

tourists

, to allow the entrance to any nationally and historically important place including museums, art exhibitions, parks and historical places is more beneficial and I completely agree that the

fee

should not be different.