Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
age, people say that the loss of some certain plants and animals species
are the main environmental problem while others believe that there are more important environmental problems. This
essay agrees that the extinction of most living species
is not the most essential issue for environmental concern.
Human is a social creature who needs to communicate and socialize for living which is different from other living species
.In real life
situations, Add a hyphen
real-life
such
as in a deep forest, particular plants and animals need a specific co-operate between
each wild Change preposition
with
lives
due to their survival. The loss from a few Fix the agreement mistake
life
species
could affect another which affect from disruption the food chain. For example
, a white tiger that used to be widely seen on Java island, Indonesia now their
exist only for a study in the zoo.
Back to reality, humans always play a huge role as an environmental protector of Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
planet earth but their act is totally opposite. Moreover
, we continue to create an
endless Correct article usage
apply
amounts
of heat from using CFC gas which caused a neverending greenhouse effect. Correct the article-noun agreement
amount
For instance
, the carbon emission rate is increasing rapidly yearly due to illegal industrial's expansion in many parts of the world. As a result
, an international agreement to reduce carbon footprint is useless.
In conclusion, among every environmental problem human
seem to be the ones who made the problem worst. The loss of particular Fix the agreement mistake
humans
species
of plants and animals is one of the most significant issues. Whilst there are a lot more problems to concern, such
as global warming and carbon emission which is more urgent.Submitted by tanat30635.ts on
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