Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people claim that it is more pleasurable and comfortable to watch a

live

event

on

TV

.

While

I tend to agree with that idea, I would say that to be a part of one of those events is the best experience in one’s life. On the one hand, many reasons follow the idea that watching a

live

broadcast

event

on

TV

is more enjoyable. There are many people

said

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who said

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that it is very annoying to book

tickets

to the

event

and they have to spend much time driving to where the

event

is held.

Also

, the cost of staying at home and watching the

event

with some snacks

are

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is

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far cheaper than the cost of buying

tickets

and driving to the

event

’s site. And the snack’s price is

also

higher than those in a grocery store.

For instance

, the

Olympics

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Olympic

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Games is an international sports

event

that takes place every four years, and each time it occurs in a country that the host picked.

Therefore

, to attend on

this

occasion, we have to spend a lot of dollars on booking

tickets

at

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for

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the games and

also

plane

tickets

if it is too far from your country.

On the other hand

, the one who finds watching a

live

performance on

TV

more exciting

maybe

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may

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lack of sense of participation. The first point is that the atmosphere at the stadium is very exciting and amusing, much more than the atmosphere when we

watching

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watch

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at home. At home, we cannot feel happiness or sadness directly with hundreds of people surrounding us. The second point is that enjoying a

live

performance is not just to watch a play or a match but is to participate in a crowd and

feeling

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feel

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the emotions of a thrilled throng.

For example

, when watching a football match at a stadium, we could share the happiness with the next-sit friends with a goal. In conclusion,

while

it is comfortable and convenient when

watching

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watch

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a

live

performance on

TV

, we cannot deny many feelings that watching directly brings us.