Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.
In the cutting-edge era, technology has become
a
essential part of everybody life. In Change the article
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past
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,past
people
were doing work manually and it is also
confused lot
of Change the article
a lot
time
. I believe that,
the advantages of appliances are more compared to drawbacks and I will Remove the comma
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also
explain both sides of this
notion.
Generally speaking, there are some people
who believe that,
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technology
works so effortlessly and reduces human workload. Perhaps, the predominant reason is thatAdd an article
the technology
,
the apparatus works accurately and, it is Remove the comma
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also
cost and time efficient
. Add a hyphen
time-efficient
For example
, Asian textile in Bangladesh, produces bulk
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a bulk
the bulk
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amounts
time
. It is only possible because they have world
most advanced machines. Correct article usage
the world
Moreover
, electric gadgets make women household chores easier.As a result
, they do not need to spend longer
hours Replace the word
long
in
cleaning or in Change preposition
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kitchen
. For illustration, Correct article usage
the kitchen
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government-run
,
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due
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increases
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tool
women are now enjoying more free Fix the agreement mistake
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time
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On the other hand
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advance
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have
some negative development on Change the verb form
has
people
. Firstly
,In past
folks doing all work by hand or more physically but Correct article usage
the past
in
present Change preposition
at
time
they become more lazy
due to frequent Replace the words
lazier
uses
of devices. Fix the agreement mistake
use
As a result
, they are facing some diseases. secondly
, It is true machinery good are so cheap comparer to handmade but, the durability are
very low. For, example, one year Change the verb form
is
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a back
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aback
with
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low
price but I could not wear it Correct article usage
a low
more
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for more
then
6 months but my grandpa have a shawl which is almost 15 years older but still in good condition.
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people
life so comfortable and enjoyable.Submitted by mahmuduts on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...