Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Health
care
is the most significant primary requirement and necessity, for an individual residing in any country
. It is always a debatable issue whether the Government
of a country
should provide medical services
free of cost
to its Citizens, yet if the services
of hospitals and doctors
are very costly. I agree that Govt. should be willing to provide free health
care
facilities
to all its population. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall elucidate the factors that will lead the Govt. to provide these facilities
.
On the one hand
, Most of the country
's population especially the underprivileged across the world in these times of epidemic, covid 19 crisis, are struggling to receive hospital and pharmacy services
because of shortages like Testing with different machines, oxygen cylinders, ventilators and oxygen concentrators. Moreover
, with an increasingly huge number of cases reported on a daily basis, doctors
and nurses find it difficult to cope with the limited health
care
infrastructure facilities
and are under constant pressure to improve it, by building new, as well as expanding the capacities of existing facilities
. Consequently
, more General public, who are diagnosed with diseases are not able to receive treatment. Therefore
, Government
should assist these underprivileged countrymen, as well as other people
confronting service shortages, with support and cooperation by building more infrastructure and hiring qualified doctors
and nurses at no cost
, subsequently
, to ease the burden on hospital and public health
care
centres.
On other hand
, the High-Cost
services
of doctors
and treatments are not been afforded by many Common people
who work
on company payrolls, like the treatment of cancer with chemotherapy and open-heart surgery along with stem installation, which cost
thousands of dollars in single time. Furthermore
, these people
expect Authorities to support them and provide all medical facilities
starting from all testing, doctors
check-up as well as and organ transplants. Thus
, Government
should provide all healthcare facilities
to all its citizens, at no cost
.
I conclude, that because most of the country
's population are in low and middle-income groups. So, Government
should take all responsibility for medical services
including all high-cost
treatments like organ transplants and other's facilities
with no bill payment. As a result
, countrymen feel happy and satisfied from authorities for receiving all health
care
services
at no cost
.
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people
believe that studying at university
or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school
. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A few people
have a viewpoint that enrolling in a famous University
and obtaining a degree is worthful and it will land themself in the finest Multi-National Corporate Companies
, whereas some others will be pondering to undertake employment immediately after completing school
. I agree with the former point of view and in a forthcoming paragraph, I will elucidate the reasons why an individual should take up employment after graduating.
On one hand
, Education is said to be the passport of the future, and an individual, who has passed from a university
or from its affiliated college, will not only obtain the dream job
offer from one of the finest MNC'S but also
can demand the highest salary, perks, and incentives. Because most of the companies
in this
the
modern era has certain prerequisites Correct article usage
apply
such
high qualification from renowned University
and required skills
, accordingly
land talented graduates in their companies
and take up a more challenging role of managing and developing the business. Moreover
, research conducted by the California research institute has emphasized that Corporate companies
prefer to hire 60% more individuals who have high qualifications and skills
obtained by studying from renowned universities and colleges.
On the other
hand
, people
who prefer to undertake job
opportunities after school
always struggle to find dream job
opportunities in the corporate world, because they neither qualify for the requirements of qualification and skills
set up by these companies
nor can perform job
duties and responsibilities as expected by their supervisors and manger because of lack of understanding of corporate work
. Hence
, they end up taking low profile jobs that require low skills
, abilities and knowledge, compared to their requirements of corporate companies
. Hence
, it is obvious that industry requires people
, who have high qualifications and knowledge.
Therefore
, I conclude that an individual who prefer
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prefers
first
in university
or college, then
choose to work
on job
opportunities will be more satisfied with higher job
roles prospects in different fields than those who prefer to work
first
after school
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