Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There are many reasons why illegal

music

is considered to be a threat to the

music

industry and something should be done to protect illegal

music

from the internet. I personally agree with

this

statement and

this

essay will show more details.

First

of all , the singer or producer spent so much

time

and put the effort to do every step of a

song

.

For example

, they have to think about the lyrics , the story of the

song

, the sound of vocals and

also

the location to shoot the

music

video so every step takes

time

and money but if their

music

did not successful like no one listens to the

music

they would lose both money and

time

by getting nothing back. 

On the other hand

, if a

song

is successful , many people listen to their

music

and share their

song

with others , they will get more income by selling the albums or streaming the

song

via online platforms and

also

get a reputation. 

However

, when the

song

is well-known there is someone who shares it illegal and the population will listen to

this

song

for free and they got nothing back at the same

time

.

Therefore

, they should do something to prevent

this

happen.

For example

, creating the rule through the company to punish someone who shares it publicly without permission from the company. In my opinion , I think the person who makes a mistake by sharing a

song

in the public should be punished. In conclusion , nowadays we have various platforms to share illegal

music

and many ways to do

this

so we have to seriously punish the person who intends to do

this

.

This

is recommended to create a law team to solve an event like

this

.