Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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online even though it does not acquire
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newspaper
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.
Although
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news
,
internet
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tends to be
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convenient
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platform to use more.
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news
from
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is easier to reach and up to date. Because it is
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online
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platform, the
news
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always
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for 24 hours.
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, everyone
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the
internet
to read
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newspapers
daily
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there are many resources they can take but online has been
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platform for a century now. One of the examples is BBC , it maintains
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variety of current
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that had
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happened
around the world.
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is why
internet
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is good for checking the present
news
.
Moreover
,mobile phone makes online
news
accessible for everyone at any time.
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some people might think it is not comfortable to carry it around, technological products tend to be
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convenient
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of size compare to
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newspaper
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while reading. The readers can select the
news
they prefer
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it appears many
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for people to read.
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,
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is surrounded
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everywhere currently. In conclusion,though I think it gives
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of selection,
news
can be selected in
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categories
that we choose. I think if everyone
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to access it, online
news
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important that occur in the present with
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of that events.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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