Some peopel believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, umproving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger childern. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a human each and every person have some social responsibility. It is believed that free social activities should be a mandatory part of high school programmes. Social involvement led teenagers to become good humans and as well as good leaders. I agree with
this
statement but am controversial with the compulsory option. At
first
, there are so many deprived
people
all around us who didn’t get their rights
such
as food, education, clothes etc. in a developing country like Bangladesh. Teenagers can figure out
this
type of problem and can work on it which led to them become a good
human
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and by that ,way they can learn how to develop a society, how to become social and as well as how to develop a county.
For example
,
students
can tech needy children who even didn’t get their primary education which is the basic need of a human. By
this
type of ,initiate society will be developed day by day, and
students
can learn leadership qualities from there.
Secondly
,
students
can do charity like fee blood donation which led them to grow up humanity or can serve clothes to deprive
people
who even don’t have a single belonging with them or can distribute food among the poor
people
which will help them to become a leader in future to work on it and high school is the best
time
to participate
this
kind of activities because in that period of
time
most of the
students
take wrong decision to drive them in a good way.
For example
, most of the
people
add with crime during teenage age because that
time
they think they can make a good decision and whatever they think all are correct. But community service can not be compulsory because by all kinds of mandatory works
people
become bored even though it is a good job. To conclude, social service is a good way to build up a healthy society and high school
time
is the best
time
to drive it. As there is a proverb , “Today’s children are the future of tomorrow”.
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